Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Short Story: Reflection In Paris

 Reflection In Paris

She has just arrived to her hotel room in Paris. She opened the room's balcony door and took a look at the magnificent Eiffel Tower and the surrounding amazing view.  The breeze was passing by her cheeks and flowing through her room. The smell of rain was still fresh after it had just stopped raining. It was a refreshing moment. She witnessed the beautiful sunset while smoking her last cigarette. There was so much on her mind. Passionate ideas, an intertwined mixture of happy and disappointing thoughts,  and an empty feeling of loneliness. She is passionate about her designs. She is an American fashion designer. She came to Paris to show her designs and to be inspired by the whole fashion community in Paris. Tomorrow is her fashion show and she is pretty nervous. She had smoked a whole pack of cigarettes in one day to calm her nerves. She is not much of a smoker, but yet felt the urge to turn to cigarettes for temporary relief from her anxiety.  She is happy she has accomplished her dream goal, but tomorrow feels like a judgement day for her. It's all the critical fashion views that she might not be able to handle. She had worked really hard all her life to reach this moment. She is loathing for acceptance not disapproval.  That's not all what's on her mind. She is missing someone. Someone really special. The person who pushed her to get where she is now and who really believed in her. The only person she had ever loved. A day before she arrived to Paris she had a fight with him. She wanted him to be there at her show. To provide her with support and comfort. However, he couldn't leave his business. There were many issues and situations that needed to be addressed. So he was all tied up with his work. He really wanted to be there but couldn't. So After they argued, she left sad and disappointed to the conclusion that he won't make it. Now, she is missing him and thinking of him.
At the end of the night she went to bed hoping her show will be a success. The next day she woke up to a door knock. She received flowers from him that was delivered to her room with a card wishing her a great successful day. She was happy with that sweet gesture. It was like a motivation to kick her fears away and get ready for her special day. At the show, all the models were rocking her designs. Everyone was impressed with her collection. Her show was a great success. At the end of the show, when she came out waving to the crowd, she saw him standing and clapping for her. At that moment she felt complete. 

                                                                                                                              -Story by Nora


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  2. I would love to go to Pairs someday! Lovely post and story!


  3. Lovely story!

    Have a great rest of the week

  4. How do you come up with these stories.Amazing! You should be writing a book!

  5. So fabulous story, I love Paris <3


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  7. Omg!!! This is so sweet,at the same time very emotional!!! I love it. He delivered fresh flowers and the next day he was there with her at the fashion show. What more could she get,''success'' and a surprise package. Life is beautiful. Babes you made my day with this beautiful post.

  8. You are an amazing and talented writer sweety, great narration!

  9. Great!!!


  10. Touching ...
    Would you like perhaps to follow each other via Bloglovin and GFC?
    Let me know :)

  11. so a cute story! <3
    xx Ann
    P.S.:tried it again with GFC, I hope it worked. (:

  12. Nice post. I follow you via gfc and bloglovin.

  13. Just come across hour short story , love it!!


  14. Olá!!!, Deus te abençoe boa tarde, amiga amei entra neste blog post maravilhoso, SUCESSO AMIGA.
    já estou te seguindo aguardo retribuição.
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  15. lovely story!:) your style of writing is just adorable!♥

  16. following you back! xo

  17. Oh, I love this! Great story and with a happy end! :) You're so talented and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories ;)

  18. aw such a dreamy sweet story :) glad it ended happily was worried about the girl in the story haha :)

  19. Love the story! Sweet thrill to it!:) thank you for responding to write more stories! Very talented!




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